The heart of our democracy

Democracy's are formed,
yet many won't remain,
when autocrats emerge
to prolong their lengthy reigns..
Fighting to the death,
these soldiers of Ukraine,
thru personal sacrifice and loss,
their territories to sustain..
We must not abandon them
when their weary war wanes.
The heart of our Democracy is
strengthened by their gains..

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Date: 2/27/2024 1:32:00 PM
Sadly, their plight is similar to that of the Vietnamese we fought for in the 60's, and nothing ever came of it. But I don't hear of anything bad happening there today. I wonder if they are even communists in Viet Nam. Yes, I agree with you . Some really bad things are going to happen with OUR democracy and everybody else's.
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Date: 2/27/2024 2:30:00 AM
Should be fast tracked into NATO, cos lets face it, we’ve seen this script before, so let's get rid of the mad man before he moves on to the next country.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/27/2024 1:50:00 PM
Hi Paul, I think there might be too many mad men out there unfortunately. I agree with you that they should be fast tracked into NATO. Appreciate your visit Paul. Blessings
Date: 2/26/2024 4:33:00 PM
Dear Nancy, Your poem is a powerful call to action. The stark contrast between the fragility of democracies and the ruthless ambition of autocrats creates a sense of urgency. The poignant image of Ukrainian soldiers fighting for their land captures the true cost of freedom. Your powerful statement, "We must not abandon them," is striking. The concluding line, "The heart of our Democracy is strengthened by their gains," is a beautiful reminder that the fight for freedom and democracy is a global one. Nancy, this is a moving and impactful poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/27/2024 1:48:00 PM
Hi Daniel, Thank you for such an in depth critique of my poem and I like so many of us here, hope that our country will continue to support the situation in Ukraine at such a dire time. Blessings to you and always appreciate your visits.
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