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The heart is fine art

The heart is fine art.
A complex body part.
One that  beats along roads with a spear part. 
Through this body part all things are felt. 
This is the vital organ to the body of the world. 
From it, sweet notes unfurl. 
Curled into the sweaty palms of a lover. 
A new beating hope under a dust cover. 
Hoping not to rediscover past pain. 
The loving heart trying to keep our brain sain. 
Fighting every strain.


A universal heart dashing through the rain with a sprain. 
Determined with out a Cain.
Spread all through the world turkey,england, Spain.
A loving heart broken and fixed, again and again.
Leaving behind stains irritable to the brain. 
Still hope runs thorough the worlds vains. 
As this heart to the worldly body is slain. 
A steady heart beat is regained. 
Fueling the world to sustain balance. 
Sustain the remains,but still it slips on blood stains. 
Washed away soon by golden rain.
Oh what a strain for a heart that never shown disdain.
Yet from its beating notes one has never heard complain.
Beating down road of love dodging acid rain. 
Finding shelter and spreading loving heart beats in every domain.


A heart we fail to entertain but still love again and again. 
How can we explain our disdain. 
That seems to soar the earth on a fast lane. 
Treating the heart of our bodily world so inhumane,
negligence and pain is the stifling  gas main to the hearts bane. 
What folly and madness conquers the lands of earth,
dying unrecognized, 


                                  the art of a hearts worth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/22/2012 3:49:00 AM
It is something we should look after, the heart. I enjoyed this Elliott, a nice piece, and thank or stopping by my work I realy appreciate it.
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Date: 4/19/2012 7:10:00 AM
Hi Elliott, I enjoyed this very much. There is a lot of meaning in your words. It is amazing that you were able to make it rhyme all the way through. Great piece ...Samia
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Date: 4/19/2012 2:36:00 AM
Nice rhyming, 'in the main'...Yes, "what folly and madness ..." Greatr! Terry
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:07:00 PM
Thats avery heartfelt expressed story, Nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Erich
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:46:00 PM
I never knew so much rhyming was possible. You may have broken new ground here...thought provoking and uplifting piece. Cheers, Terry
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:57:00 AM
Outstanding piece, Elliot. Excellent write. Great job. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
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Date: 4/16/2012 2:31:00 AM
Oh yes love is a complicated thing, well done, keep up the excellent writing
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:38:00 AM
Yes it is Elliot...agree with you. Well written - like it alot. - oxox Anne-Lise
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