The Hawthorn of Bru na Boinne

Form: Seadna


Mist climbs the fields of Bru na Boinne
                where cattle paths grow dim;
a lone hawthorn keeps the rath
                   where daylight thins to rim.

Old men passing touch their caps
          and leave the thorn-tree be;
for roots run deep in hollow earth
              and house the hidden Si.

When Atlantic winds go wandering
                across the western plain,
a flute-note floats through folding grass
                    like breath from elder reign.

No hearth-light burns upon the rise,
              no shepherd waits the sky—
yet silver steps set dew aflame
          as though a court passed by.

The hawthorn leans but will not break
            though winter scours the land;
for halls lie deep beneath its roots
              no mortal hand has spanned.

Mist gathers round the fairy hill
        as travellers wander wide;
for none would wake the Aos Si
  who breathe on the other side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Achara Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:31 AM
A simply fantastic poem. WOW
MITRA Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 6:03 PM
Good Achara, Thy generous commendation I receive with sincere gratitude. In truth, the fashioning of this small piece was no light labour, for the cadence and temper of the Seadna demanded a careful hand and patient ear. Yet the task was rendered gentler by long admiration for the ancient lore and literature of Ireland, whose twilight fields and elder myths have ever held a quiet dominion over my imagination. If any whisper of that old world be felt within the verses, it is owed chiefly to that enduring fascination. I thank thee kindly for thy encouraging words. With respect and goodwill, I remain, Mohit Mitra
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