Athul Raj Poet Free verse

The Hardest Thing To Live Without

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  the hardest thing to live without....
On his death bed, 
      holdin' her he said 

" 'O' my lady, 
      beautiful life you gave me

Was just a seed,
      without care 

You took care of me,
      gave me life 

Nothin' I do could ever,
      return your love 

My dream's were,
      without hope 

My sky was,
      without star 

My heart was,
      without love 

I, my love was, 
      just flesh 

Cold numb and,
      worn out 

What would've I done,
      without you" 

Tears fell down like waterfall
She couldn't feel him anymore, he was gone 
The next moment she too said goodbye to her flesh 
He was waiting for her 
Love, my friend without doubt 
      The hardest thing to live without.....

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Poet Destroyer A June 23, 2016 at 10:45 PM Athul, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moon Flower June 16, 2016 at 11:25 AM That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Athul. :)

Probir Gupta June 15, 2016 at 8:12 PM Well said and well written ...

Skat A June 15, 2016 at 7:21 AM Athul,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**