The Hardest Part

I'm very glad to hold your waist against mine;
smelling your perfume, and feeling your warmth.

Our heartbeats though, are becoming slower and colder;
you are moving out to another place, because of a better job;
I swear it, I'm really happy for you.

I just wish that God would somehow pause time a little bit,
to give us time to kiss, celebrate life, laugh, and play around
in the open fields.

I will miss your pancakes, smile, voice, sweet heart.......everything
about you.

The hardest part for me right now, is to tell you "goodbye"......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 7:53 PM
____________ :) :) :) ________ PD
A   Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 9:34 PM
thank you for the reply on my comment
Kimathi Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 6:06 AM
Welcome! ^_^ <3 <3 <3
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:05 PM
oh so sad - i love the fact you miss the pancakes before anything else - that made me smile - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Lol. Thanks Jan! ^_^ <3
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your win for this sad poem Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Thanks for your applause Brenda! ^_^
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:39 AM
Congrats on the win, Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 5:42 AM
Thank you very much for your applause and continuous support Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
A   Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Teddy, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 11:59 PM
Thank you Linda! ^_^ <3 <3 Love, Teddy.
Kiser Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:52 AM
A very touching piece. I hope that your move brings many wonderful opportunities and joy.
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Thank you for your encouragement and well-wishes Kiser! :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:14 AM
What a sweet parting you have described here. Nicely put.
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 3:50 AM
Thank you for your comment Scott! :-)
Devnath  Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:30 AM
Nice but smelling sad somewhere in the poem. Loved always,bl
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 3:49 AM
Lol. True; the poem smells of sadness..... Thanks for reading and commenting my work BL! :-)
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