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The Hard Explanation of Pain

For these few years past How I have sought to explain, Though I keep a positive face A useful even helpful life, a quiet voice, The deep bleeding cost The shadow that hovers near Even the sun's best days The soul's cells, how they Learn to cower and shrink For fear they will waken again A dragon that barely sleeps When wakens it roars And spreads its harsh breath Into the body both electrical And bone hammering aches The hope destroyer The fear feeder This deep unending pain And that indeed, one does Slowly change.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 10:06:00 AM
oh my gosh, you TOO wrote of a dragon inside your soul. You have to see what I said about it (because I used it a bit differently) Mine is called The Dark Poet (adjusted title for the contest it was in, originally it was called Dragon Child) It is so cool to find someone who thinks in the same way here from time to time! I really enjoyed your take on the dragon!Mine is expression of desire to "ROAR" Luv andrea PS. Can u tell me so I can be sure, was your dragon perhaps someone outside yourself?
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:07:00 PM
I am sorry for the pain. I hope it has lessened. This is a very descriptive and well rendered po.em
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:21:00 PM
pain is a touchy subject--enjoyed
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:00:00 PM
I LIKE THE SUPER COOL RHYME. KEEP IT BLASTIN ON YO PEN. bUfFy
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:15:00 PM
This is such a nice poem. Sorry you had to go through these pains. Thank you so much for your nice comments. Scarlett
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:50:00 PM
Having to cope with such pain can really be difficult, Linda. The dragon's eyes are always upon us and we sometimes feel like we don't even recognize ourselves. This is very deep. Nicely done. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2010 2:12:00 PM
Interesting write...Change sometimes is very hard but helps us to grow...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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