The Hangin' Tree

Folks avoid that spooky place 'specially on dark and stormy nights!
Heard are eerie moans and shrieks and seen are mysterious lights!
A driftin' hoss thief by the unlikely name of One-Eyed Buck LaHore,
Was strung up on the 'hangin' tree' way back in '72, accordin' to local lore!

Now, ol' Jedge Stern, renowned as the 'hangin' jedge' in them there parts,
Owned the hoss that Buck stole, showin' no respect and lack of smarts!
Buck vanished in the night a-high-tailin' it fer the Mexican border,
Trailed by a posse to bring 'im back dead er alive upon the jedge's order!

He was found carousin' in an El Paso cantina havin' a grand ol' spree!
The sheriff said, "Son, come with me! You've got a date with the 'hangin' tree'!"
There was little Buck could do with a dozen forty-fours starin' 'im in the face!
"Boys, you got me! Don't make a scene! Let's git outta this here place!"

Hauled before the jedge, Buck admitted he'd been a hell-raiser all his life.
"But, jedge" he pled, "I didn't cause no harm like molestin' a feller's wife!"
Judge Stern saw things diff'runt 'specially since 'twas his hoss he stole!
"Son, you're to be strung up on a tree and may God save yer rotten soul!"

To this very day on moonlit nights Buck can be seen swingin' in the breeze,
Clawin' at the noose about his neck yellin', "Jedge, have mercy on me please!"
That stern ol' jedge has shown no mercy as is evident from all indications.
Alas, the ghost of that wily thief will haunt local folks for many generations!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Dufresne Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 3:18 PM
Awesome, Robert. I enjoyed this tale in poetic form . Ya dun a raht propa job of it ya did, dang ma mule skun hide! haha loved your lingo. I like that sort of language playing. Me and a buddy write letters back and forth like that. lots of fun. I really did enjoy the heck out of this poem Robert. It is a success on many fronts. Thanks for sharing it
Onclaud Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 10:02 PM
still gives me the chills, bob.. got a new piece? ; excited to read you once more.. huggs:) nette
Neels Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Bob, I don't think this is a poem I should be reading all alone on a Sunday evening lol :) but I really did enjoy this story.. Hope yourself and Vera are doing great :) tc
A   Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Good morning Bob H., always at your best... I must tell you, I followed the story quite well... a mischief bunch... but the tree... and feelings gave me an eerie hunch.. and wonder if this is a true ghost folks belief... you are beyond creative... always with an enjoyment to read.. take care... always .. p.d..
Francis Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 6:05 AM
I like this one Bob! I would gladly hang someone for stealing one of my hosses!
Peranteau Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Ya know my dear poetic friend...I think, if you wanted to...as in; props on yer portfolio of forms you've writen...you can chalk this one up as...'Cowboy'...oh yea...if'n they actually have that form these dayz *smiles* Great write sir ! Have a great weekend...much love, james
Foulk Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:07 PM
this was such a funny one you wrote, when will it stop, i hope never, you do have a gift of bringing us a smile and making our day.
Dailey Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 9:31 AM
I liked the story but had trouble with the rhythm of the poem. Mike
Zzzzz Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 8:54 AM
An interesting and entertaining poem, Robert. It puts me in mind of the film of the same name, starring Gary Cooper and Karl Malden. Regards, Robert.
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 5:52 AM
rare suspense thrilling me, bob..chillin'! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:26 PM
luv this piece Bob and the mysterious overtone of the ghostly moaning from the tree hanging luv.. did a great job with slang vocab.. super as always..
Miller Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 7:41 PM
In all honesty that a lovely story ya telling there. My dad fell in love wi it I think. Beautiful
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