The Handkerchief

THE HANDKERCHIEF heavy babushka wrought with widow’s drawn out tears a brief lover’s note 6/28/2017 haiku form
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Rigoler Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Kim, to my knowledge a babushka is either a grandmother or a kerchief. Where did you get the definition "handkerchief"? Just curious. Yes, in chess the Queen is the all-important piece. Thanks for stopping by. /
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Handkerchief is listed as a synonym. I enjoyed using the word which could be used in many different ways for enjoyment in this haiku. Having relations of a Ukranian background I enjoyed. Hope you did too :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 6:49 PM
I really like this one, Kim. Good luck if it is for the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Wolf Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Oh, this is sad! Well done haiku though!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you kindly, my friend!
Green Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Sadly beautiful, you have said so much and created such a sorrowed vision in three short lines.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks so much, Chris!
Allison Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:24 AM
beautiful but sad imagery Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thanks, Jan!
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