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The Halo Effect

A halo was formed within the mind's eye A halo was placed a top your head A halo was taken off from a top your head once was smitten by your charms once was smitten by your very being once was smitten by your very presence till one day the halo that i had so unwittingly placed upon your head fell apart shattered into tinny little pieces and fell to the ground knocking you from a top your pedestal that i had unknowingly placed you upon

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Date: 6/21/2017 3:41:00 PM
Uh oh. Sounds like someone 'fell from grace?" I got from this poem perhaps someone hadn't lived up to expectations and in the end everything toppled?? I enjoyed this!
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