The Hallucination

White waves that crash upon the shore,
An aestheric sunset,amber and raw,
Dusky sands peppered with the ash of bones,
A vigour of blue,leaves every heart wanting more,
Stroking her beautiful cheeks,he saw,
In the depth of her eyes ,a place forlorn,
Her golden eyelashes covered her brown core.

A beastly wind,the drastic thunder,
the pour of rain,feeds the pitiless storm,
The sky,a greasy course tarnished with white,
Souls flash in the rain, immoral blunder,
Their eyes shine with sin in bloody forms,
Lips that tearfully wronged the right,
As reckless as thunder,a handsome blunder.

The serenity of the chirps,
Serenading birds on the peak of the branch,
The beautiful monsters of nature,
Just like the soul in her eyes,they rise up,
To him she's beauty in an avalanche,
A beast without a nomenclature,
A spirit in her charm,disturbed.

The beauty of drops of dew on the grass,
Energies of gushing waterfalls,
Or mere ripples that grace the stillness,
She was a breeze that wore off the brass,
A dreadful reality,to him calls,
Like a painful,incurable illness,
He learns that his apparition won't last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 12:33 AM
niyomi shah, well done on your win. Luv ~PD~
Shah Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Thanks a lot.......
Kimathi Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 4:05 AM
What a captivating, picturesque piece!!! Congrats Niyomi, for your top placement with this awesome piece!!! ;-)
Shah Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:19 AM
Thanks a lot Teddy...
Anish Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Stimulating verse here ! Welcome to the "soup"! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Shah Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:20 AM
Thanks a lot Matthew ....
Dalei Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Dear Niyomi, Wonderful & a great write. Ur poem is sound with imagery of nature in a different way. Everything is perfect. Truly impressive.............with love
Shah Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thanks a lot Manmath....
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April 21, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Thanks a lot Manmath....
A. Sharma Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Awesome write niyomi.. congrats on big win..
Shah Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Thank you .....
A  Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:01 AM
niyomi shah, deep write. skat
Shah Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Thanks a lot Skat....
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