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The Hallucination

White waves that crash upon the shore, An aestheric sunset,amber and raw, Dusky sands peppered with the ash of bones, A vigour of blue,leaves every heart wanting more, Stroking her beautiful cheeks,he saw, In the depth of her eyes ,a place forlorn, Her golden eyelashes covered her brown core. A beastly wind,the drastic thunder, the pour of rain,feeds the pitiless storm, The sky,a greasy course tarnished with white, Souls flash in the rain, immoral blunder, Their eyes shine with sin in bloody forms, Lips that tearfully wronged the right, As reckless as thunder,a handsome blunder. The serenity of the chirps, Serenading birds on the peak of the branch, The beautiful monsters of nature, Just like the soul in her eyes,they rise up, To him she's beauty in an avalanche, A beast without a nomenclature, A spirit in her charm,disturbed. The beauty of drops of dew on the grass, Energies of gushing waterfalls, Or mere ripples that grace the stillness, She was a breeze that wore off the brass, A dreadful reality,to him calls, Like a painful,incurable illness, He learns that his apparition won't last.

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:33:00 AM
niyomi shah, well done on your win. Luv ~PD~
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/28/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thanks a lot.......
Date: 4/26/2016 4:05:00 AM
What a captivating, picturesque piece!!! Congrats Niyomi, for your top placement with this awesome piece!!! ;-)
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/26/2016 5:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot Teddy...
Date: 4/25/2016 9:34:00 PM
Stimulating verse here ! Welcome to the "soup"! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/26/2016 3:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot Matthew ....
Date: 4/21/2016 5:29:00 AM
Dear Niyomi, Wonderful & a great write. Ur poem is sound with imagery of nature in a different way. Everything is perfect. Truly impressive.............with love
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/21/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thanks a lot Manmath....
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/21/2016 5:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot Manmath....
Date: 4/20/2016 10:29:00 PM
Awesome write niyomi.. congrats on big win..
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/21/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thank you .....
Date: 4/20/2016 12:01:00 AM
niyomi shah, deep write. skat
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Niyomi Shah
Date: 4/20/2016 12:01:00 PM
Thanks a lot Skat....

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