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The Hallowed Night

Above the moon flocked, steepled pines Eternal sky - the hallowed night Celestial alms of grand designs Sing silent psalms in ancient light

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Hilo Poet

Date: 8/14/2021 12:33:00 PM

David, the candor depth of your metaphors has an arresting feel, added with your intriguing word usage was truly overwhelming. My compliments on your fine placement my friend, Aloha!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/14/2021 10:11:00 AM

David, thanks for giving me this poem. It is truly fine writing at its best. Congratulations on your placement in my contest!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/14/2021 9:44:00 AM

Dear David, this piece is so atmospherically and spiritually beautiful. I adore your word choices, they are splendid to convey the feeling of "the hallowed night", and I admire your rhyme of "pines/designs". Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win, David :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 1:17:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem David!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2015 3:21:00 PM

Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara

Lee Carter

Date: 7/29/2015 2:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win david beautiful poem! ~lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2015 11:41:00 PM

this is very pretty. I am surprised to be the first to comment to this one. Good luck in the contest. I have one that I will need to post soon, but I think mine is two stanzas?? If it can only be one verse, I hope mine is just the one!!