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The Hallowed Night

Above the moon flocked, steepled pines
     Eternal sky - the hallowed night
      Celestial alms of grand designs
    Sing silent psalms in ancient light

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2015

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Hilo Poet Date: 8/14/2021 12:33:00 PM David, the candor depth of your metaphors has an arresting feel, added with your intriguing word usage was truly overwhelming. My compliments on your fine placement my friend, Aloha! Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 8/14/2021 10:11:00 AM David, thanks for giving me this poem. It is truly fine writing at its best. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 8/14/2021 9:44:00 AM Dear David, this piece is so atmospherically and spiritually beautiful. I adore your word choices, they are splendid to convey the feeling of "the hallowed night", and I admire your rhyme of "pines/designs". Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 7/30/2015 2:42:00 PM Congrats on your win, David :) Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/30/2015 1:17:00 AM Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem David! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/29/2015 3:21:00 PM Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara Login to Reply

Lee Carter Date: 7/29/2015 2:34:00 PM Congrats on your win david beautiful poem! ~lee Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/11/2015 11:41:00 PM this is very pretty. I am surprised to be the first to comment to this one. Good luck in the contest. I have one that I will need to post soon, but I think mine is two stanzas?? If it can only be one verse, I hope mine is just the one!! Login to Reply