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The Guy Who Forgot His Receipt

There once was a guy named pete Who find out there was nothing to eat So he went to the shop Bought a dozen mops But then he forgot the receipt!

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Date: 2/6/2016 1:50:00 PM
lovely humour Amina - you need to make sure the syllable counts for line 1 2 and 5 are the same and lines 3 and 4 also match - I use the howmanysyllables.com :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:58:00 PM
did i do it wrong?

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