The Guy Who Forgot His Receipt

There once was a guy named pete
Who find out there was nothing to eat
So he went to the shop
Bought a dozen mops
But then he forgot the receipt!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 6, 2016 at 1:50 PM
lovely humour Amina - you need to make sure the syllable counts for line 1 2 and 5 are the same and lines 3 and 4 also match - I use the howmanysyllables.com :-) hugs Jan xx
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February 6, 2016 at 1:58 PM
did i do it wrong?
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