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The Guilty Father

Lying in a prison cell bed, she hoped all fear and the secret would vanish The night of her wedding forgotten now that she had killed her father in law The horrors that curse her dreams this night awakes her with bleeding tears burning scars into cheeks Despairing at the glow of the silver lit moon Not wanting to stir the monsters that taunt Nor the memories of guilt that surely will haunt For in the dark lie secrets that loom Revenge did not ease The pain of violation The Tyrant she killed Her husband still unaware His father, the guilty one DATE: 3/9/16 Challenge - Write One - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 9/16/2016 1:42:00 PM
Laura, I initially smiled at the second line thinking about how many people say they want to kill their in-laws, but it is obviously a serious subject you have written so eloquently about. Dark secrets in someones dark life, well done.
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/20/2016 4:54:00 AM
Many thanks for your positive feedback James, much appreciated, warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/10/2016 7:29:00 AM
Superbly done my friend Laura...and congrats!!!...god bless...^WW^
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/14/2016 10:34:00 AM
Thank you kindly WW, warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/10/2016 3:07:00 AM
Congrats for this superb write...Very touching and well deserving..
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/14/2016 10:34:00 AM
Much appreciate your feedback Olusegun! Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/9/2016 3:38:00 PM
Excellent write, Laura. I have seen the series, and this is a very powerful topic you so emotionally brought forth in your well-written poem. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/14/2016 10:33:00 AM
Much appreciated Sandra, hope you've enjoyed this series as much as i have and a very topical storyline it is too. Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/9/2016 1:13:00 PM
Laura, this is chilling! Congrats!
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/14/2016 10:32:00 AM
Many thanks Kim!! Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/9/2016 10:55:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this deep and beautifully penned poem, I love the layout too ~
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/14/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much BW!! I guess i underestimated myself with this, I certainly enjoyed this very challenging contest though and appreciate you chosing it in your top picks. Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/9/2016 10:00:00 AM
This was no easy challenge, Laura, but you tackled it with a very capable pen and a fitting sad topic! I can't stand men who treat women badly! ~ Congratulations on placing first:) Warm regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/14/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Paul, it was a difficult challenge and i wasnt sure i'd done it justice, but feel good with the feedback received and of course the placing too! Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/9/2016 9:26:00 AM
Well penned Laura!...Congrats on your win..
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/9/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph! Same to you, warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/9/2016 7:41:00 AM
ohhh. so deep, great flow lovely Laura...congrats on your top placement! :)-luloo
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/9/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Luloo ;) warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/8/2016 7:51:00 AM
Not a big fan of TV but from your description it is a very good write, Laura. We just don't realize how fortunate we are to live in a free country. I enjoyed the explanation and then I thoroughly enjoyed your well written poem. Good luck in contest.
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/9/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel, we are indeed fortunate! Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 9/8/2016 5:48:00 AM
A very good taking up the challenge ... the psychological features of the episode skilfully dealt with in a poem ... all the best ...
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Laura Hay
Date: 9/8/2016 6:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir, it was a very difficult challenge, appreciate your kind review, warm regards, Laura.

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