The Grip On the American Dream

Are there efforts so bleak?
Grumbling stairways and windows that need paint 
Utility bills comes first and food for the meek

That’s what they’ve become striving each day 
Mortgage rates hit there high 
Forcing families to leave there homes and stray 

Forecloses no longer a thing of the past 
Boarded up windows and signs on the laws 
Greedy banks handing out amounts so vast 

Now they tighten their grip on working folks 
First they part with their phone or cable TV
Next they’ve lost their heat and their homes go up in smoke 

Now home fires are on the raise 
Unheated they put blankets over doors 
Caught on fire from the use of space heaters and there surprised 

It’s a domino effect didn’t anyone see  
How greed and keeping up with the Jones 
Made America be so in need
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 7:38 PM
Smile~I like this sincerely compassionate and sadly truth-filled write of yours my talented poetic friend! It flowed so well and spoke so loudly! You are quite a poetess are you not! Ah, the greed and manipulation of the few, which causes the pain and sufferings of so many!! Excellent write again gifted Laura Mckenzie!! Much Warmth & Many Blessings To You & Your Loves Always, John!":)
Richards Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 5:48 PM
The state of our nation...you put it in such a thought provoking, unfortunately, honest portrayal. Sad but true, Laura. Great write! ~ Carrie
Higgins Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 3:44 PM
Amazing write my friend. America is need of a life support..I love this piece..no bull..shooting straight.
Faulkner Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 2:30 PM
love this poem. very amazing write-;love and peace:james
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