The Grieving

The Grieving 

A frenzy, a chaos of
celebration all around.
Togetherness and ritual imposed while 
inside of me a splintering

No respite, no escape from 
faces eager to connect 
to share, to love.
Grief is a mongrel here;
an agony of burden on 
the righteous shoulders of joy

I can only run, crying out,
in frantic search of

This tree, this breeze that
gives me permission 
gives me space 
to breathe 
to be

Its tapestry of lace against 
a grey ocean of sky 
shrouds me from expectation,
from judgement,
defending my right 
to grieve 
to peace

At Christmas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 3:52 PM
:) ENJOYING A SECOND TIME. LINDA
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 6:27 PM
You have captured grief well here. A strong start to your Poetry Soup experience. May 2015 bring you many smiles.
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 5:16 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Victoria :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Victoria , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Very sad write , Merry Christmas, Victoria
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