The Grief of Loss 2k11

Helmets prevent not confusion of mind.  
Armores prevent not a heavily heart.  
Shields prevent not unseen undermined.  
Swords deeper not as when Loved One's depart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 15, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Always creative layout, bringing out great meaning, Anthony! It is not important, but just for the sake of a perfect execution of your write, "sheilds" should be "shields, and "sords", should be "swords". Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
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July 13, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Anthony. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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