The Grief of Loss 2k11

Helmets prevent not confusion of mind. Armores prevent not a heavily heart. Shields prevent not unseen undermined. Swords deeper not as when Loved One's depart.

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/15/2011 5:42:00 PM

Always creative layout, bringing out great meaning, Anthony! It is not important, but just for the sake of a perfect execution of your write, "sheilds" should be "shields, and "sords", should be "swords". Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 11:32:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Anthony. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol