The Grey Is Thundering

(30/11/2013)

It was only white and blue in 
the sky
Then the soft grey starting to 
replace the white
Over the wind, the blue shooed by
Sun is glad, at home relaxing 
with the bright
The then-soft-grey is darker now
White and blue have given 
their bow

Again, dark grey has won
Has pulled curtain on the sun
Bluffed and kicked colors to be gone

The thunder is roaring to 
celebrate
Feeling sad, the rain is pouring 
its cry
Darkest shade of grey,
Rambling in thundering to sing 
its victory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/28/2014 3:24:00 PM
DINDA, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:12:00 PM
dazzling piece,didnda.. special congrats to you..huggs
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:46:00 AM
Reading this one again.... Sounds like my life right now... The gray is always winning... luv~ Linda
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 1/14/2014 11:59:00 AM
i dont believe it. how can grey defeat a warm soul, which who u are? :p
Date: 1/5/2014 3:07:00 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Dinda
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Date: 1/3/2014 9:57:00 PM
Dinda, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
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Date: 12/28/2013 3:53:00 PM
Dinda a very colourful write …I like it a lot…david
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 1/4/2014 11:47:00 PM
thank you, David dear. have a prosperous and healthy 2014 :)
Date: 12/24/2013 3:33:00 AM
Dinda--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:07:00 AM
Hi Dinda I like this poem and the metaphoric expression that you have used. This piece has an element of irony too. Nice work.
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:55:00 PM
Dear Dinda, this is fantastic poetry from you. Is this for the color of sound contest.? If not, it would sure work well in that one. VERY nice!
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:06:00 PM
Dear poet, Dinda I was happy last week to hear from you. but, wow! thanks a million for adding my twisted little poetic mind on your favorite list. I enjoyed the deeper side of the imagery here, glad victory will have a voice. by the way, I tried adding you on my list. Lol, red letters appeared saying you're already on my list. then I remembered of course you are, I remember you're one of the first poets who stopped by many times in the past. have a nice one-Skat
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Date: 11/30/2013 8:32:00 PM
but a temporary victory nice poem
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Date: 11/30/2013 12:39:00 PM
- After the thunder comes the sun .... lovely written Dinda. - Have a happy weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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