P.S. Awtry Poet Diminished Hexaverse

The Green of Spring

Hidden in the dark
But drawn to the light
It’s worth the effort
That’s it!  You’ve got this!
All is possible

So far, so good
Still believing
Struggling upward
New and shiny

Bashful sprouts
Unfurled leaves
Wobbly legs

Hopeful
Promise

Spring!



April 26, 2019
Diminished Hexaverse About Spring Poetry Contest
Caren Krustsinger, Sponsor

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Gershon Wolf April 28, 2019 at 1:27 PM Great narrative here. Actually a tear-jerker of sorts for me. Love a happy ending too! G.L. in the contest! :) gw P.S. Awtry April 28, 2019 at 3:30 PM thank you Gershon for your lovely comment :) ~ps

Lawrence Sharp April 27, 2019 at 12:35 AM A very uplifting description, words very well chosen indeed. Nice write, PS. P.S. Awtry April 27, 2019 at 7:22 AM Thank you so much :) -ps

Mark Toney April 26, 2019 at 10:13 PM P. S., very positive and encouraging. Spring has sprung! ~Mark P.S. Awtry April 26, 2019 at 11:16 PM Thank you Mark! Yes spring has spring and what a bummer summer fast on its heels ;)