The Green Beneath the Snow

a rhyme for the spring equinox...

the hills are growing green beneath the snow 
white horses, shake the winter from your manes
the spring has come, the wild wind told me so

cold ice be gone, and warm sweet water flow
come, crocuses, and flower on the plains
the hills are growing green beneath the snow

grey gulls fly high, and clouds of blossom blow
come, laughing crows, and dance within the rains
the spring has come, the wild wind told me so

soon summer, and so many seeds to sow
come, sun, spill down the furrows of the lanes
the hills are growing green beneath the snow

bright gorse ablaze, and alder tops aglow
come blood, and flood the burrows of the veins
the spring has come, the wild wind told me so

dark night be gone, long days of light to go
come love, with all your mysteries and pains
the hills are growing green beneath the snow
and spring has come, the wild wind told me so

© Gail Foster 17th March 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Spring is well and truly here Gail! many congrats on POTD with this gorgeous poem:-) hugs jan xx
Foster Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Thanks, Jan, and hugs back :) x
Williams Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Great write Gail, congratulations on POTD....Maria
Foster Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Thank you very much, Maria
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March 22, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Wonderful penning! Congratulations on potd! Thoroughly enjoyed the read :)
Foster Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Krampe Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Gail, this is wonderful! I am so longing for spring, and your poem speaks to me. Congrats on POTD. This is a fave.
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Thanks, Agnes. This is one of my Avebury poems, written for and read at The Gorsedd.
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Gorgeous poetry... congratulations Gail
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Thanks so much, Tim!
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March 22, 2018 at 12:29 PM
- Lovely poem about spring coming, Gail :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, and cheery hugs to you too :)
May Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Great write Gail...Congrats on POTD
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Thank you! This has made my day.
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Lovely work Gail, congratulations for POTD honors...
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:45 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie
Pett Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Hi Gail, congratulations on POTD with your beautifully written villanelle. :))
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:45 PM
Thank you, Roy. This being Poem of the Day has been a lovely surprise :)
Wanter Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:51 AM
I really love the spring beauty you portrayed in the form you used. Congratulations!
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Thank you very much! Wiltshire has only just melted after the snow.
Messina Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Hi Gail, may the wild wind tell you for evermore. Nice write..Congrats on your POTD.....All the very best....Charlie
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Thank you so much, Charles! All the best to you.
One Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:16 AM
You do this form so well, fitting POTD...
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Oh! Poem of the Day! Thank you so much, Silent One, and I hope you are well.
Warrior Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Very well executed Gail...Congrats!!! on POTD my friend...the green cometh...stay in the light...^WW^
Foster Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thank you very much, Winged Warrior! Always the light...G
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