The Greatest Treasure

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lR8BaGbOoL8 A twine of hope is worth more then a thousand strings of doubt an open door more precious then , "the knock on wood" design A lucky rabbit foot, a four leaf clover, just trinkets to amuse, but a prayer on the lips can ease the soul & give a heart restore One act of kindness is more real then the fakery and flattery of sly and one good deed more valuable then a sedentary talk of good Often love is grasped with fiery hands of lust and eyes of blind, when all it needs is an ounce of grace, and time to grow; Too late we learn the meaning of success and I for one confess a yarn of truth is worth far more then tomorrows idle promise honesty is a gleaning cup so who needs a fluted glass of bluff when one straight talk is valued at the price of gold and myrrh A twine of hope can be wrapped around your finger as reminder and its better then a thousand "told you so " from a proud achiever humble thyself when it comes to helping others never be deskbound sharing poetry with you like this, is the greatest treasure I found …

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Date: 6/29/2020 11:39:00 AM
Sharing poetry is beautiful and so inspiring .. thats why we poets write... lovely thoughts.
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Date: 6/28/2020 6:02:00 PM
Heartfelt lines PD...your work is lovely...jmg
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Date: 6/28/2020 2:36:00 PM
Just imagine how different our world would be today if everyone had to write down their prayer before sending it up in smoke! And write down justification the consequences of their requests! Ergo, you hit the nail on the head! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:10:00 AM
True gems of wisdom throughout your poem, Vienna. You found depth and serenity--of a sage advice.
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