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The Greatest of These

The Greatest of These… A portrait of the perfect tenderness eternal, Painted from the rising mists of a broken promise - Finished on a Friday afternoon – complete the promise Of the everlasting word in worldly wastelands and in realms of glory Daily molding vessels born of earthly clay To take the shape of living covenants Spoken in deserts and on flood tides - on mountaintops in bare feet And temples built on lofty mounts Where a king danced naked before the word - Leading every dawn of life away from bitter tears indifferent, Whole – redeemed – refreshed – not strutting, No more teardrops lost within a sea of sand, A shining lantern through shadowed valleys Lifting hearts to heights unimagined Where angels walk above the fallen stars – Pure essence of the eternal and all knowing Spoken, whispered, to orphans of a garden still seeking mystery; Cherished companion of the pilgrim throughout every season Embracing the perfection of the amazing, abiding eternal.

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Date: 3/20/2020 9:04:00 PM
I really like your art references: portrait, paint, molding vessels. All the great Bible allusions: desert, flood, mountaintop, dancing king. "Orphans of a garden" - great phrase. But the line I most love is, " Embracing the perfection of the amazing, abiding eternal". This builds so nicely and has some beautiful landmarks on the journey. A fav for me. Thank you, Sam
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/21/2020 1:01:00 PM
Hi John, thank you for the honor of your "fav!" And your message! I loved building this poem with all of the "art" references and the biblical references. It is one of my favorites too. If I remember the last one just jumped out on me and I also love it! It is so comforting for me. Stay well. Blessings!
Date: 1/29/2020 8:47:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... worthy of pondering. God bless you.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2020 10:22:00 PM
Hi Beata, Thank you so much for your message. Seems to me God's love is phanthomless. Blessings to you!
Date: 1/29/2020 12:21:00 PM
Sam once again I am back to congratulate you on your win!;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2020 12:35:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much my friend. The theme for the contest was one I thought so important especially at this moment in time.
Date: 10/26/2019 8:15:00 AM
wonderful penning Sam...congratulations on your win.... hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/13/2019 6:19:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you for your congratulations and good thoughts.
Date: 10/25/2019 6:11:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/25/2019 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Eve. This was a beautiful and inspiring theme.
Date: 10/24/2019 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry and thank you for entering. God bless you always, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/25/2019 7:26:00 PM
Hi Gina! Thank you for sponsoring such an incredible theme. In these times, I believe we all need to focus on love and charity. Writing this poem was a great reminder!

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