The Greatest Love Story

The greatest love story ever told
Is right here in my heart
It isn't fancy with fancy words
It's sweet like the song of a lark

No need for any material things
To prove the depth my love
Just holding your body close to mine
A love that fits like a glove

Many words have since been written
About how true love endures
Words expressing one's inner feelings 
Feelings so intense and pure

Life on earth is a fleeting thing
We're here next moment we're gone
Love until your very last breath
Too soon you'll be passing the baton

My heart sings with the joys of love
Tender words flow out like a river
The greatest love story ever told
Makes my soul and body quiver 

© Jack Ellison 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 3:05 PM
"A love that fits like a glove" When love just fits, what an amazing feeling. I like your tender writes. So sweet! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 3:42 PM
What an older softy eh!!! Wrote that 6 years ago... nothing's changed!!! LOL Kisses heading your way, sweet Laura! xox
Akpojotor Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Wonderful piece you got here Elison. 'LOVE MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND'. Your poem has said it all. Love is the air we breathe. Bless you Elison.
Ellison Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Very nice comments on my poem about love! Thank you friend! Cheers, Jack
Eastman Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Your wife is a very lucky person! This time I'll behave when you get serious... cause I know the fun will later come back. Your friend
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 12:48 PM
Wrong, I'm the lucky one! You're right... back to the fun stuff! Love you, my lady... hugs, Jack xox
Komala Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 9:52 AM
I really enjoy your Greatest Love story tonight...this is awesome..very very romantic..thank you Jack for your wonderful sharing <3<3<3 luv and hugs :) SK
Ellison Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 4:41 PM
WOW you are sweet, my friend... thanks a bunch! Love and warm hugs, Jack xox
Haick Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Enjoyed your Quatrain, Jack..good advice... to love until your last breath. Life is short but not so bad when you share it with the one you love. Annalise
Ellison Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 4:29 AM
Love your sweet words of wisdom, dear Annalise! Life is way too short... so love and laugh till your very last breath! Hugs, Jack xox
Croft Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 3:16 PM
very beautiful poem Jack!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Thanks a bunch Karen! Your kind words are much appreciated! Love and happy thoughts, Jack
Gooden Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Its good to love, Jack, and to be able to express that love; in its purest form, love is wonderful. Nice words. Continue to love.
Ellison Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Your words are sweet Sherese! Thank you! Love is the answer... big hugs, Jack xox
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