The Greatest Gift

The Greatest Gift-

Can you see me standing 
On the edge of my beauty?
But yet I’m lost along the way....
I’m a million phasing wavelengths 
Of light and sound
Coursing through your veins.
I am the movement of the universe 
In the space between a breath.
I’m just a brushstroke of earth and sky
The soil that holds 
The impression of your steps..

Can you feel me flowing like a river?
As your time here rushes the same?
You can fill me up,
But I can be empty still..
But I never change my name.
I’m the reason for your laughter.
And why your laughter turns to cries..

Don’t You see me all around?
I’m right before your eyes!

I was here before You came to me.
And I’ll be here when you leave.
A priceless treasure you can’t save up..
But upon me you build your dreams.

Do you know me when you have me?
Can you save me if Your Strong?
Will You want me if I’m not perfect?
And when I end up being wrong?

Can You share me with another?
Or will you use me to just cause strife?
Do You realize what I am to You?

I’m a gift God has given You..
I’m Your Life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/9/2018 8:11:00 PM
Your beautiful and compelling poem held me captive in its thoughtful and meaningful verse, James. What a great first post. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/16/2018 1:02:00 PM
No wonder this poem is featured. I get so excited when my poems get featured. I hope you do too!
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Date: 10/9/2018 3:36:00 PM
My brother finally getting heard by all so talented so real so destined to be great Recovery brings new light new chances new beginnings and ends remember for another chance it is never too late
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Date: 10/9/2018 12:39:00 AM
I woke up early this morning, James and found your beautiful poem. What a great reminder to use this day well! Thank you for your inspirational thoughts. Wendy
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