Edward Ibeh Poet Sedoka

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The Great White Egret

 The great white egret
       Silhouettes against the sky
It's massive wingspan, outstretched

            With it's spear-like bill
         It skims the water surface
        Searching for a prey to stab



Best Sedoka - 577-577 Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Lu Loo 
Date written and posted: 05/03/2019

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Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2019 at 3:22 PM sure enjoyed this descriptive one about the egret. congrats for your win, Edward. Edward Ibeh June 12, 2019 at 5:26 AM Thank you, Andrea:-)

Tania Kitchin June 10, 2019 at 5:49 PM Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win, with this lovely gem! Edward Ibeh June 11, 2019 at 6:08 AM Thanks again, Tania:-) Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2019 at 1:45 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Edward Ibeh June 10, 2019 at 4:19 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!:-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2019 at 9:55 AM Great write! You have done this majestic bird justice! Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest, xomo Edward Ibeh May 6, 2019 at 11:42 AM Thank you very much, Maureen:-)

Tania Kitchin May 3, 2019 at 5:40 PM Love it, beautiful imagery Ed! Edward Ibeh May 3, 2019 at 7:44 PM Thanks for the lovely visit, Tania:-)