The Great Sun God

I looked over the horizon 
waited for the sun to rise
time ticked by but darkness still rained
and I thought how nice it would be 
if the sun rose right now
and the heat that I craved
the dawn was here now
the more I thought 
the more it rose 
my brothers wounds healed
from the battle of the night
Hades will be upset
the Underworld lost it's might
Ares punched my arm 
and Thor lifted his hammer
Zeus gave a smile
and the sea god laughed a while
I had made the sun rise
and that is my job 
because I am Apollo
the great sun god

--For the contest I suppose--

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/12/2010 8:29:00 AM
Ryan, congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Glory gods (For Men Only)". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:31:00 PM
lol you suppose? well i suppose you did great on your poem :D congrats n.n
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:16:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Ryan
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Date: 8/6/2010 2:55:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your success in my GLORY 'gods' contest with this exceptional write.. thankxxx for supporting my contest ..happy weekend.. with luv..
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