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The Great Outdoors

cobweb suspension
of October’s dangling leaves;
acorns scattering
as squirrels and chipmunks spat
in season’s amphitheater 

10/3/2021
Bite Size Poem No 22

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

October 7, 2021 at 11:18 AM

So much happening here; I can see it and it makes me smile.

October 7, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Yay! :)

October 5, 2021 at 12:27 PM

Bite size --- but so much to chew on! Wonderful, Kim! :) Gershon

October 5, 2021 at 1:35 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Victor Buhagiar

October 4, 2021 at 1:33 AM

Great metaphoric idea about the fall.

October 4, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Thank you, Victor!

October 4, 2021 at 12:39 AM

Ah the elegance of Fall Kim

October 4, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Fun season!

October 3, 2021 at 7:41 PM

Excellent poem Kim. I enjoyed this :)

October 4, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Thank you, Heidi!

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2021 at 3:04 PM

GREAT images, Kim. Enjoyable read.

October 4, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Mystic Rose Rose

October 3, 2021 at 1:41 PM

Thank God for squirrels and acorns alike, I enjoyed your entry very much, have a blessed Sunday, :)

October 3, 2021 at 1:51 PM

Thank you, Rose! True observations :)

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