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The Great Maze

My friend and I went to a maze. He decided to watch me and guide me from the tower. Upon entering he said "Have fun" and "see you at the exit”. At first, full of energy. Amazed with all the new things. Followed some people who were ahead It was just great! During the journey, I got to a point were I had to separated from several people. There were times when: I followed the crowds, Explore different courses, Or walk by inertia One day, I found myself in a “Dark Dead End”. I felt lonely and trapped, "Please, I need help" I Cried. Suddenly, between my sob. I heard the voice of my forgotten Friend in the Tower: "Seek for lightttt" Happy to hear his voice, spotted a ray of light. I got on my way back again. I forgot, “I’m not alone” Thanks, dear Friend! You have a better view from up there. You can see the whole Maze.

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Date: 7/3/2021 6:59:00 AM
God always helps if we call out to him with faith. This is what I felt on reading your poem. A poem that can be interpreted in many ways is a good poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.
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Angie Millan-Acosta
Date: 7/7/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Rama, Yes, you just have to be humble ask for help. God is always here, ready to help.
Date: 6/25/2021 10:20:00 AM
Hi Angie, I have not received your email on my soup mail, please send it to me, if you are still interested in the poetry reading. Thank you, God bless
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