The Great Maharana

Maharana was great,he has patriotic spirit,
When he was a child,he was brave , desperate
He knows all weapon's he has played with thems,
He was different from all of children's.
All enemy's scared of him,hides like silly cricket.

 when he was growing up,
.  he wants to buy a horse,
 who is mighty and running fast,
  somebody come to  sale him two horses,
. He wants to test both forces ,
. Ones able to run faster than air,
  second have power to jump higher,
 but maharana pratap never be unfair,
 he has test the honesty of both horces,
 he fixed there lags under of earth,
for testing who's worth,
 he calls both horses with name,
 help me chatak help viren.
 the frist horse not trying to come out for him ,
 but chatak jumps like he has wings ,
 rana choose chatak for lifetime ride,
 maharana and chatak is our pride.

 maharana and chatak have a strong friendship,
 because both of them have patriotic spirit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Goff Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 4:34 PM
Wonderful, uplifting poem, Shreastha...you are thousands miles from here in Minnesota....but our communities share values reflected in stories handed down for centuries....in my case, involves ancestors exodus from Irish Potato famine late 19th. Century (Moms side) & William Goffe...(Angel of Hadley)...Regicide, fleeing King Charles 1st's son...(late 17th. Century) Dads side
Vyas Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Thank you so much sir,and give me suggestions for perfection.
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