Get Your Premium Membership

The Great Lakes Ace

Above, a few feet, From the gallery Archaeologists spotted the empty space Larger than the cross off M-68 by about 3 times But they aren't the only ones exploring a void Ancient like the pyramids is empty in the chest of the boys Digging up the artifacts of time Hidden in your lines That I write And when we collide It's like a land mine Hid in the jungle near a pyramid where Built between rivers 2 shrines to weary livers and lovers Whether its desert or monsoon weather, When it's winter You will be there Somewhere in the hardware store Picking out the tools you need To dig more deeply In the spaces left between Or to mend that stupid leak

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/5/2019 10:36:00 AM
New, new, new... Its beauty, its expression, its creativity and its flare... This is breath taking and this year will definitely give us the fulfillment we seek. Wonderful write full of envious sentences...
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Jonathan Smith
Date: 1/5/2019 11:07:00 AM
I appreciate the praise! Thank you!
Date: 1/2/2019 8:19:00 AM
This one is fascinating, something you can read multiple times and interpret in many different ways.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Jonathan Smith
Date: 1/2/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words!

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry