The Great Enemy

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Time is against us all. It has... two feet, not one, but two, and it sprints... out of reach when we remain idle. Your Turn For A Tyburn Poetry Contest Sponsored by charles messina (Winner: 4th Place) Date written and submitted: 08/14/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2019 7:08:00 PM

though it is not to form, It's a very intelligent poem and i am glad to see it here by reading the list. Congrats, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/1/2019 8:26:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea:-) Glad you loved it anyway...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2019 7:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tyburn poem, Edward :) - Hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2019 8:55:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Same to you!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/29/2019 6:12:00 AM

Edward, this is a great poem, unfortunately, you had to rhyme the first four words so I had to place this at the bottom. Thank you for entering my contest my dear friend. All the best...Charlie

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 12:44:00 PM

No worries, Charlie!:-) I appreciate you placing me anyway! I forgot how to properly write a Tyburn! Oops, sorry...lol