The Great Blue Hole

 
Let us go on an expedition to the bottom of The Great Blue Hole in Belize grab your diving gear because we are going to dive down into a circular sinkhole created thousands of years ago deep, deep, deep ... down, down, down at the surface the blue water is crystal clear surrounded by a ring of a lighter shade but, as we travel down the limestone walls it becomes misty and darker and we begin to discover many submerged caves where icicle-shaped stalactite mineral formations hang with their pointed tips and stalagmites grow from the cave floors reaching up for the ceiling that remind me of carved columns but today we will not be exploring any of the caves we want to find the bottom down, down, down ... we fall into the dark and pass dead coral skeletons and fossilized marine life and limestone boulder formations at the bottom we find a vast sandy floor oh, beware of the sharks patrolling ... now, it is time to go up, up, up those limestone walls for we are 354 feet down _________________ May 23, 2021 Poetry/Narrative/The Great Blue Hole Copyright Protected, ID 05-1357-612-23 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Blue Hole sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 06/05/2021

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Date: 6/6/2021 1:55:00 PM
I must use the decriptive 'what a deep write' Yes Constance it sure took me a long way Although I was already sitting down, I don't Know if that qualifies as adding even extra Depth to the piece? LOL))) Enjoyed reading hope you are Well? Joe'
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Constance La France
Date: 6/6/2021 7:33:00 PM
Joe, thanks for visiting my Blue Hole poem, and for the comment, it was great writing it and re-reading it now, not sure why it did not place in the contest, but oh well... I am doing well thank you, peace _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 1:30:00 PM
Amazing adventure, Constance - dangerous, mesmerizing, full of enchantment like the call of a siren's song. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2021 5:09:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment and comment, love _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 12:10:00 PM
Holy mackerel!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2021 5:09:00 PM
Rico, lol, you are so funny, peace _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 10:52:00 AM
It's poetical as well as informative.
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:11:00 PM
christuraj, thanks for visiting my poem, and the compliment, it is a real place but actually only experienced divers are allowed because it is so dangerous, peace _Constance
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