The Great Achiever

“Agha Ojadili” 
(The Great Achiever)

Dance steps reverberate in the square
We celebrate a feasting festival
A special festival of achievement
Albeit of a silent kind

Animated bodies writhe in rhythm
To ecstatic drumbeats and “udu”
The “oja”, reeling out praise names
Of none other than the achiever’s

Failure it says, is orphaned
But success, a dozen kinsmen
Several toes tip and push
To behold “Ojadili”, who overcame

In his honour maidens display
The sacred dance of maiden-ness
A silent shouting contest
To woo him you may ask

The spirits bow in shame
He came, saw and conquered
Desecrated their invincibility
But, stood tall to tell the tale

Rejoice, rejoice you tribesmen
An epoch has just commenced
Reach the crescendo of ecstasy
Rippling muscles and chests

Beware!  Be on guard “Ojadili”!
The soloist “Oja” rings aloud clearly
The war is fought, won and kept
The two you did and the third?


Ezenwuba , Uche
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 30, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Uchenna , Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
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May 28, 2013 at 6:56 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
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May 28, 2013 at 6:55 PM
You poem made me feel like I was there. This poem was written quite well. I hope you get some more comments on it. Thanks for submitting it to my contest. Please do so again some time. Kim
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