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The Graying Mind

To find solitude in a helpless mind A silent new world from its judgment found To ponder this curse unreasoned and blind Anger is pressed when arguments abound To find a crack in mirrored perfection Where prideful instructions will intercede With memories of the mind's reflection Now old and failing and meant to mislead Tethered to distress from the mind's mire Trapped in its kettle of old boiling brew To suffocate in its murky quagmire As clarity of thought passes from view To find each thought a dim lit realm of shades To hold them close as the memory fades 5/13/18 contest Premiere II...Open Poetry contest

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:53:00 PM
Well done, Frederic. Congrats on your silver medal finish.
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Date: 5/15/2018 4:37:00 PM
Returning with well deserved congratulations for your excellent win, Frederic, with this awesome poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/15/2018 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 5/15/2018 12:17:00 AM
Grateful for your support with my contests. Congrats.
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Date: 5/14/2018 8:03:00 AM
the more one ages , he becomes like finer wine.. and this poem gives off that flavored whiff, frederic.... well done, soneteer!..huggs
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Date: 5/14/2018 7:38:00 AM
Well written Frederic. I like the line: A silent new world from its judgment found :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 9:19:00 PM
Frederic, I absolutely love the brilliant title you gave to this poignant poem, of the aging brain and the despair it can bring with the decline of one's mind and mental acuity.. Your first line is powerful and captivates attention and your last two lines are especially thought provoking and moving. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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