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The Gray Side

Your fingers dance upon my silky curves All of the loving sounds we both shall make As your hypnotized watching my hips swerve Thinking I could be your biggest mistake If one never dances on the dark side Then how can you appreciate the light See experience I'd like to provide I'll safely bring a brightness to your night Breathless anticipation,bad yet good Never was a more exciting pairing Should never second guess with "If I should?" Let's walk on the gray side, be more daring Neither light nor dark I'm just a bit gray Not good nor bad I will meet you halfway

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/3/2019 10:32:00 AM
I can feel a yearning within this sonnet, Bren, You pen this emotion so well. I enjoyed your sonnet my friend. All the best to you. John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you John so very much!;)
Date: 8/2/2019 10:15:00 PM
Nicely contrived, Poetess; I like the last line...I think you might have unintentionally added "me" before the word "meet". :) Just an easily rectified oversight. In fondness. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/2/2019 11:33:00 PM
Lol thanks John I guess I did mess it up didn't I?;)

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