Brenda Chiri Poet Sonnet

The Gray Side

Your fingers dance upon my silky curves 
All of the loving sounds we both shall make
As your hypnotized watching my hips swerve
Thinking I could be your biggest mistake

If one never dances on the dark side
Then how can you appreciate the light
See experience I'd like to provide
I'll safely bring a brightness to your night

Breathless anticipation,bad yet good
Never was a more exciting pairing
Should never second guess with "If I should?"
Let's walk on the gray side, be more daring

Neither light nor dark I'm just a bit gray
Not good nor bad I will meet you halfway

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John Gondolf August 3, 2019 at 10:32 AM I can feel a yearning within this sonnet, Bren, You pen this emotion so well. I enjoyed your sonnet my friend. All the best to you. John Brenda Chiri August 5, 2019 at 4:49 PM Thank you John so very much!;)

John Fleming August 2, 2019 at 10:15 PM Nicely contrived, Poetess; I like the last line...I think you might have unintentionally added "me" before the word "meet". :) Just an easily rectified oversight. In fondness. :) john Brenda Chiri August 2, 2019 at 11:33 PM Lol thanks John I guess I did mess it up didn't I?;)