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The Grass Was Wet With Dew

The grass was wet with dew Beneath her bare feet She could not stop now Not even to eat Her collie was running wild As this place was brand new She caught up with him He was chasing a cat It was painted on a Subaru On the left side of the hatch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/6/2011 12:27:00 PM
What an original take on the barefoot contest, Adrienne. When it comes to bare feet, animals take the prize. Wishing you success. I am not the best example of a haiku writer. Rick Parise and Charles Henderson have some gems though. Love, Carolyn
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Adrienne Gresham
Date: 6/6/2011 12:31:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 6/6/2011 12:26:00 PM
thank you for entering my contest, yours was a unique take on it, contest is almost full judging will be very soon
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Adrienne Gresham
Date: 6/6/2011 12:32:00 PM
Thank you for accepting it and thanks for your kind words of encouragement

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