The Grapevine

Traveling along the Grapevine 
soft green hills look like earthy fabric
folded into velvet shadow crevices. 
Layers of rich, luxurious shapes
form the mountainous terrain. 

As we make our way along the highway
the golden glow of the afternoon sun
caresses the flowing hillsides 
oh so gently
on this cool winter’s day. 

Sparse oaks flash their amber leaves 
over the muted landscape
loudly interrupting introverted hues 
that linger quietly over the grassy fields. 

Against a whitewashed sky
hints of snow can be seen 
amongst the scarce pines
while in the valley, sagebrush whip around 
on a random road near run down barns 
where ravens hide. 

A linear network of power lines appear
marching like steel sentries
transformers conquering fields
while a formidable army of cars and trucks 
hurry towards their endless destinations 
unaware of the quiet beauty that surrounds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Buhagiar Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 2:33 AM
This is a great poem. Power lines are essential and should be well-maintained.
Leiser Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Victor. Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for stopping by! :)
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 4:59 AM
a linear network of power lines traverse like sentries, marching and conquering ..a metaphor that blend human activity with natural observation.. Nice one Laura. Congrats
Leiser Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Thank you, Jenish. I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Wow. This is gorgeous. Congrats
Leiser Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:08 AM
Thank you, Andrea! I’m happy you stopped by to read my poem. :)
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