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The Grape Pain

Today I am a grape Hanging on a vine Perhaps to be plucked one day Ending up in someones wine Maybe I'll be bitter One of the worst ones you could eat Or possibly be the most tastey ones The sweetist of the sweet I hang with a bunch of others That I see all through the day Longing to be anywhere But there seems to be no way Seeing alot of other beauties Farther down the line Hoping they will notice me When I'm plump and in my prime though now the nights are getting colder Others have begun to all fall down Bunches of dying grapes Laying everywhere on the ground Unable to handle this madness I'm letting go of this vine tonite So I won't have to wake to this sadness That I must see through each days light
Dan Kearley:9-21-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 19, 2012 at 2:43 PM
a xool poem..Dan, loving grapes... why the sad and deep ending... the poem started off fun... anyways..PD
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November 8, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Awesome one! Gotta favorite it. This is very creative! You're a sweet grape for sure. ;) Always, Laura
Fields Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Too bad, so sad, your poem. No comment on style..the sentiment is great... your friend in the pen/i think i wil recommend. your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
Kearley Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Gary... :-D
Wesley Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 7:32 PM
Before you fall of the vine let me pick you and taste.
Kearley Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Blushingly...agreed :-)~o0o0O (grapes)
Lane Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Juicy. Tony
Kearley Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Thank you Tony.
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