The Grandeur

I look upon the night sky in awe, wishing I could fly if only to touch a meager star would make me smile by far I could never fathom the master plan for each star and each constellation, I am just a fan admiring the splendor it is like a new venture, The stars glitter and smile each with their own unique style I have the honor of looking at the night sky wishing I had the wings to fly to only touch them for a while…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 1, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Hey Wilma, pragtige gedig en ek mis die Suider Sky! Hoe dikwels het ek gekyk na tha lug in die nag in Papoea-Nieu-Guinee en die oë was oorweldigend! Here are too many lights at night to really appreciate the stars - a pity! Did you know that they had found a "second earth" 20 Light years away? They believe that ther will be water to on the planet. Het agreat Sondag en sorg! Dankie vir jou vriendelike comments1 ... Gert:)
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September 28, 2010 at 6:25 PM
One day you shall wear them as gems in your crown, let's live by faith and through faith let love abound. This poem already forms a point in your royal star, Wilma
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September 28, 2010 at 8:15 AM
If only we had wings, I too wold love to fly through the night sky, Wilma. Indeed there is grandeur throughout the universe that would be fun to explore. Your wonderful poem should do nicely in the contest, Wilma. Wishing you success. Nice to see you having a bit of time to post some new work again. I'm sure your job has been keeping you very busy. Love, Carolyn
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September 28, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Great write that you have presented in this one..I am honored to have been blessed by reading it today..Thanks for stopping by and looking again at my poem..I thought that you missed that...You can edit your comments by: go to top left where it says member area, click with the mouse arrow...it will take you to your member area..there will be a section that says in box and out box on your comments...You can correct in that section...Don't worry about changing mine but for future corrections..Sara
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September 28, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Looks like we both want "Wings"...lol very beautiful write on a mind travel through dreams....love Michael (Mr.F.)
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