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The Grand Old Clock

All alone in the corner of the room, proudly stands an old grandfather clock. His presence ever majestic looms, as he precisely tics and tocs. He counts every second of the day and every minute of our time. Never a word does he say, but every hour, in he chimes. The old gentleman is up in years and never a moment does he lose. Through all the families' joys and tears, he never touched, his hands he could not use. Now the kids are grown and left the nest. The house seems quiet and a little sad. The old grandfather clock never rests, as he watches over Mom and Dad. 10 / 24 /18

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Date: 12/1/2018 2:34:00 AM
back with congrats!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/1/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you, PS have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 10/28/2018 2:58:00 PM
Oh such wistful nostalgia and moving emotion fills your beautiful verses, Wren. I enjoyed the touching word play, imagery and affectionate tone of your poem towards 'the old gentleman' - superb poetry my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/28/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Susan, always a pleasure to hear from you. Have wonderful Sunday.
Date: 10/25/2018 12:30:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Wren - my kind of poetry. Well written describing your old friend the grandfather clock. I have 2 g/pappy clocks and they become like old friends. One I bought in Germany made in 1876 and would I ever like to know the good and bad times it has witnessed!!! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/25/2018 12:39:00 PM
Bob I have never actually own one, but have always marveled at the craftsmanship that goes into those old clocks. I bet that old German grandfather is a real beauty. thanks and have a wonderful day.
Date: 10/25/2018 11:06:00 AM
Lovely verse Wren, there is something about a grandfather clock. Would love one if I had a bigger house. Tom.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/25/2018 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Tom, have a blessed day.
Date: 10/24/2018 10:35:00 PM
You have made him dignified, and magnificent in ways.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/24/2018 11:21:00 PM
Caren I thank you and he thanks you.
Date: 10/24/2018 10:05:00 PM
"the old gentleman" :)
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Date: 10/24/2018 9:48:00 PM
Lovely poem, Wren. Beautifully done.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/24/2018 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Line very much!

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