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Twirling around the glossy smooth floor Racing with friends on roller-skates Tossing my hair as I glide across the room Feeling so certain that this is my destiny Weaving through the crowd lithely, swiftly Smiling at everyone, my heart filled with laughter Lighting the entire room with the heartfelt joy Discovered in this place where I owned elation Bending and looping through the noisy rink Listening to the tender voice of Bob Segar or Possibly, AC/DC – Lynyrd Skynyrd or some Other rock n’ roll group who teens revered Whirling through the gathering of adolescents My heart was filled with hope that I would find The chosen one, the boy who I was sure of A dream of mine, who read all those love stories Twisting and turning to the sound of Meatloaf’s voice My heart raced with delight when I saw him smiling The one I knew would be for me, forever and always Going down in history… nowadays, I kiss him each morning! The Good Old Days Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose January 9, 2021

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Date: 1/19/2021 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Regina. All your poetry is beautiful and a delight to read.
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Date: 1/17/2021 5:06:00 AM
Dear Regina, how I remember sitting on my doors step keying them into place, the original style ones I mean, before the boot. Thanks for joining me in the fun, and congrats on your 3rd place win. Loved it.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 1/17/2021 7:35:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed the memory. I enjoyed it too. Thank you for your kind words. God bless you
Date: 1/10/2021 3:35:00 AM
I hope they never end, my friend. ~~
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Date: 1/9/2021 12:30:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem, as I felt the universal feeling of nostalgia, which highlights simpler times. These moments are generally filled with happiness, which is something you demonstrated well in your writing!
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Date: 1/9/2021 3:39:00 AM
Those were the days my dearest, Regina! Wish you more beautiful days ahead though. Days filled with happiness and accomplishments! Blessings!
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