The Good Heart

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Good Heart I cannot support but stop and look at the caring, lost love. Are you upset by how affectionate it is? Does it break you apart to see the lost love so compassionate? I cannot help but stop and admire the tenacious, civic courage. Are you upset by how dogged it is? Does it break you apart to see the civic courage so stubborn? Pay attention to the dear, the dear is the wooliest innocent of all. Now hairy is just the thing, To get me wondering if the dear is flocculent. The marvelous mercy is not small! The marvelous mercy is exceptionally bigger. "Clemency," said the marvelous mercy, And "clemency," then "clemency," again. A life, however hard it tries, I will always be sober, ultimate, arrogant. Does life make you shiver? Does it? I cannot help but stop and look at the mighty, spontaneous, deceptive cheer. Does the cheer make you shiver? Does it?

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 2/24/2021 6:16:00 AM

We will never cease to ponder and wonder about the mystery of life, the tremendous might of the universe and the unpredictability of the beyond! How we remain shaken by sensitivity, amazed by acts of beauty and valour! Your poetry displays a sharp imagination and a gifted pen! A delight to read! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 2/24/2021 1:03:00 PM

I Appreciated so much your cheerful comment and encouraging words, .. thank you so much for such a great visit! and I highly appreciate your comment sister! I'm still new to PP, and still need your help and support sister Besma