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The Golden Shoe

The Golden Shoe It derailed me on arrival, there was the golden shoe A warrior who lapsed a portal, the prophecy was true His name began to roar, who ran of rapid speed And from another world, its told that he would free He rushed inside my heart, he told me we were lovers He’s to save me from the king, the prophet of thy runner He’s lost his mother in the one, and found her in thee other The Golden Shoe has come, they’re yelling in the gutters A man who has no fear, if scriptures tell it right Thy man who wears thy shoe, will strike its golden light

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Date: 10/18/2016 11:11:00 PM
RONALD, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2016 11:29:00 PM
I appreciate the love..I'll be stopping by to return also, and I really think this whole new experience is fun.
Date: 10/18/2016 9:36:00 PM
Ronald W., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/18/2016 10:14:00 PM
Thank You, I appreciate the kind gesture. I'm going to get to reading a lot of poems for the art and perspective, I've just been trying to set up this profile a little bit. I'm really trying to promote my new book ( Scattered To Perfection) A book of a compilation of 150 poems.But I'll be reading you very soon, and thank you again..enjoy the poems.