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The Golden Gate Squirrel Shape

Years ago after hitching as a lark I was dropped off at The Golden Gate Park I decided to walk for a minute or two Since I had nothing bet- ter to do Now Squir- rels and I weren't in good stead Ever since one dropped a nut on my head So when on a limb one sudden- ly appeared It was one of the things that I feared. I jumped back and it jumped down It ran up to where 2 women it found. The woman on the right wore a pants suit. Up inside her pants leg is where he did scoot As soon as he was up inside her pants, She screamed and did a high stepping dance It wasn't long before the squirrel got away But I'll tell you what it sure made my day!

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/5/2019 3:56:00 PM

pat - this is hilarious (and even more so, reading that it's a true story!) also - i don't know how you made that perfect shape - just amazing!!!

Pat Adams
Date: 1/6/2019 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Ilene. I've always been pretty good at drawing cartoons, so that probably helps some. I wanted to use some of my own drawings with my poems, but "Soup" won't let me use stuff from my desktop, so thought this would be the next best thing. It's fun but a little aggravating at times!........80)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2019 3:07:00 PM

- A fun day ... yes :))) ... a great story and a pretty shape, Pat - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Pat Adams
Date: 1/6/2019 9:25:00 AM

Thank you for commenting. I did this in about an hour. The open office version of "word" seems much more compatible with the "soup". Fun to do!! (like a puzzle)...pat

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2019 10:31:00 AM

wow love the shape and the funny story Pat!!!:-) glad the story was about a woman if it was male the squirrel could have been after his nuts lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 1/5/2019 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Jan. HA! That's true, but how would the squirrel know he had nuts in his pocket?....;0).........pat

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/5/2019 10:15:00 AM

LOL! This is funny and a terrific image too!

Pat Adams
Date: 1/5/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Kim! A true story actually........80)