The Gold Rose

She walked by on the beach one day at the end of one sweet summer and found a golden rose tucked safely between the shore and the rocks She was a messenger of God and so she listened deeply when He said " its all about fair trade my child, its all about fair trade" She tucked it in her pocket and was about to go back home when suddenly she heard the sound of a seagull's cry. There upon the beach a loner sat, with a despondent, brokenhearted sigh She handed her the golden rose without a word, then passed her by Five silver Angels watched, then fanned the mounting tide and turned the shore to shreds of light they raised her off the floor " its all about fair trade" she heard them say then she found another rose in the sand and this one, was a lovely shade of rose* She tucked it behind her ear then gave Him thanks for one more year "No regrets my Lord, no second thoughts, " At her age you see, she had finally understood the art of letting go. So taking one last look behind she just smiled, then moved along. ps: the rose was passed on to a friend who lost her mom yesterday. She died peacefully in her sleep. RIP
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Eslinger Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Now, Vie…there’s so so much forvme in this one! Itis DYNAMIC! Bless you! sally
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August 20, 2023 at 3:08 PM
P.S. a Fav
DiMino Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Such marvelous imagery. Divine expression. We must let go: of pain, sorry -- even joys and strengths. Life was never about gathering...but all about letting go. Everything we recognize as physical, is a superficial substitute, the construct of fallen will. To become like Christ is not to abandon oneself in favor of a greater ego...but to see one's offspring reflection in the loving eyes of God bidding us to take rightful dominion -- Welcome home my beloved. Anyway, my two cents for the little it may be worth.
DiMino Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Hi Sally; you have Soup Mail. Blessings my friend.
Eslinger Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Joe! Goodness! Please SpMail this paragraph. It has thingscin it i want to ponder for sure alongside Vie’s poem. Thanks in advance. sally
Nicholsen Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:26 AM
beautifully written roses are indeed forever.. blessings
Rolland Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:47 PM
my mum passed away three years ago, i would have like to think about these roses on the shore, deep and wonderful, thanks
Brotherton Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:39 PM
We must all be prepared, 'No regrets my Lord, no second thoughts.'
Situation Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:12 PM
I consider it dutiful when such things are in our range.
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