Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

The Godfather - a Godfather Born

A table set for three
                                           Permission to be excused
                                               A dish of veal served

                                                  Behind the toilet 
                                        His revenge is set and planned
                                                  Back to the table

                                                 He sits in silence
                                         As train passes by, he stands
                                                   A table for one

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Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2012 at 11:30 PM Hi, Michael. Just now seeing that you did this one. I have to tell you we really liked it. WE did a blog on some of our rules. It's because you capitalized the lines. We had so many good ones, that is one way we cut a few. So sorry. this was good. I know sometimes I don't place and I wonder why, so that's to let you know. Luv, Andrea

M.I.A . January 1, 2012 at 7:44 PM couldn't agree more with Tracie, I felt the chill to down my spine for this piece. well done, Michael

Wilma Neels January 1, 2012 at 11:39 AM I haven't watched this movie, have no idea why lol.. All the best for Andrea's contest Michael, luv Wilma

Steven Henderson January 1, 2012 at 7:37 AM Relived the movie scene as I read your Michael. Poetically well put my friend. Steve

Tracy Edwards January 1, 2012 at 7:26 AM Oo I chilling write Michael..I ike it very much.. xx Michael J. Falotico January 1, 2012 at 7:39 AM here it is "L" lol thanks Tracie... oxo Michael Tracy Edwards January 1, 2012 at 7:30 AM Someone stole my L lol Like*