'the Glowing Love'

Flashed as a star;
Flooded as water and
Grew up as the forest,
The love inside me!

Approached,approached
Seven stars, River
and a thousand trees danced into chest.

Approached,approached
To whisper inside you:
You're the moon...
Without you I'm a rainy cloud

You're the ocean...
Without you I'm a wretch bird of sea
You're the essence - fragrance of flower
Without you I'm soulless jasmine

Approached,approached;
To whisper anthem love into thy spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 23, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Fatima, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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October 23, 2013 at 9:04 PM
Dear Skat_Love ..Really I am blessed to have such friends here in " poetry soup" thank you my friend!
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October 23, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima
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October 23, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Thank you my friend Dr.Ram..!
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October 22, 2013 at 9:59 PM
enjoying this one again....PD
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October 23, 2013 at 9:00 PM
And I am enjoying seeing you around always my dear friend Linda XXOXXD
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September 28, 2013 at 9:42 PM
love the double Approaching sound.. Fatima, i sure enjoyed the passion in this one.. I am enjoying the different changes in your write.. you do good in making the reader feel the emotions, whichever the moods are... enjoying your work this far... Your Newest Fan ----LINDA
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October 2, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Hi dear Linda I am blessed to have such friend like you.<3
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September 25, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Beautiful poem, Fatima. deep expression. Check out some of mine. Might see some you like. peace.
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September 27, 2013 at 1:22 PM
Thank you dear Jiril Clemos for comment and sure i'll visit your page. Regards
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September 25, 2013 at 1:15 PM
- A really nice poem Fatima, a pleasure to read today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 27, 2013 at 1:24 PM
with my pleasure dear Anne Lise .oxox
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