Premiere Contest WinnerThe Glow of Dawn's Horizon

Daybreak usually greets me when it ascends each day. Yawning, I drowsily rise from the comfort of my bed as the horizon glows with colors in resplendent array. Dawn announces, "The warmth of Ra is on its way!" Soon, over land and sea, aureate beams will spread. Daybreak usually greets me when it ascends each day. Sunrise shines on foxes in meadows where they play, illuminating their coppery coats of orange and red as the horizon glows with colors in resplendent array. In shallows, sunlight dances with waves as they spray, creating prisms in nuanced tones of variegated thread. Daybreak usually greets me when it ascends each day. It does not matter where I wander or aimlessly stray. Mornings are idyllic once somber darkness is shed as the horizon glows with colors in resplendent array. How I'd dread a cause for the rooster's crowing delay. What a folly if the moon continued her reign instead. Daybreak usually greets me when it ascends each day, as the horizon glows with colors in resplendent array. August 11, 2022 First Person Villanelle Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins
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Calasibetta Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest! Beautifully crafted, filled with amazing imagery. :)Paulette
Tor Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Jenna congratulations on Milton's Contest. Excellent Poetry penned by you. Again big Congratulations...
Miller Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 11:58 PM
A beautiful poem Jenna, and well deserving of the top place in Miltons competition.
Logan Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Thank you so very much, Terry. I appreciate your thoughts.
Brul Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 10:39 PM
Magnificent write!Congratulations on your TOP Trophy Win, Jenna! A masterpiece!
Logan Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Thank you for your supportive comments, JCB. They are very much appreciated.
Seeker Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 8:37 AM
A tremendous write, artistic and poetic, as is your forte, Jenna. Congrats on your top win!
Logan Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Thank you ever so much for your wonderful remarks, Seeker.
Hankins Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 7:50 AM
My congratulations to you, Jenna, for a beautiful poem with stunning imagery. It quickly rose to the top of the poems I read for the contest. Your writing is exquisite, and I wish for you much success with your writing in the future. So deserving of this trophy!
Logan Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:15 AM
I am truly honored to be on your winning list, Milt. Thank you for the accolades and the many kind remarks you offer my poetry.
Fowler Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Beautiful imagery Jenna! Congratulations on your win! Linda
Logan Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Thank you very much, Linda.
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Nothing beats the stunning colours that daybreak brings that glow just before sunrise. You captured the scene well Jenna, I don't think you need luck with this one, but good luck anyway. Tom
Logan Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Thank you, Tom. I'm feeling ok but staying away from everyone for a week. I don't want to deal with it again.
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:43 PM
I'm sorry to hear that Jenna, covid certainly has not gone away yet.
Logan Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:41 PM
I'm not sure why I struggled with this Villanelle, editing it over the course of several days, but I'm glad you think it's a worthwhile write. Thanks so very much, Tom. Family reunion has produced a couple of positive covid tests. ;(
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