the glory of vanity

The glory of vanity

This Saturday started well 
I did my exercise, two toasts and coffee
Going to a café for lunch, elegantly driving 
There, this, for winter- mild day
As I entered a person rushed in front of me
Opened the door wide, I thanked him grandly
But I felt old, is this the way people see me
At home when not compared to someone youthful
 I dance in the living room and feel
Glorious, but outside, my feet are reluctant to
Lift from the ground
I wish people would see me then and not the doddering old fool
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Agustin Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 4:58 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
mysore Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 7:48 PM
ha, nice take on vanity dear poet. I enjoyed reading your thoughts. 'I never mind others stares haha.'
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