Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen Poet Naat

the glitch

I was thrown backwards after 
submitting my poem rapture 
the system posted it five times
oh well my funny valentines 
hilarious mischief again felt 
like i was in front of a raging 
shooting range killing me softly

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Victor Buhagiar February 19, 2024 at 9:56 AM With a delightful poet like you, the rifles will contain blanks. We wat you alive writing a poem five times. What! Do PS have glitches?

Hilda Greenhough February 17, 2024 at 3:07 PM An u usual poem that stays in my mind. A shooting range is no place to be. I hope you are safe.