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*Image of Santa Clause, Charlie Calvin by Giphy.
The Glass Orb In an e'er thus oft agitated contorted crystalline world, Unconsciously being tinseled by the energies that transpire, Flurries of fakery enshroud the encircled glassful menagerie. Indifferent minions from habit, obey the traumatic turbulence, Revolving in every-which-way of an inescapable no bars prism. Liquefied mirage a wintry desert of horned camels and pine dates. Nevertheless, calming ceremoniously exhibits, abruptly emerge. Ambiguity surrenders gracefully, necessitating the delusion, There exists a well-treasured keepsake immortalized in a globe. Adoringly exposed glittering peepers to overindulge in disbelief, As a seasonal passage liberates a once boxed stored wonderment. 2019 November 25 *1st Place* A Brian Strand 4 to 14 line ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 August 08 *1st Place* Stuck in a Christmas Globe ~~Bobby May: Judged 2019 December 12

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Date: 12/17/2019 12:40:00 PM
- Sorry late response ... Congratulations on your top winning poem, William :) - Christmas is approaching ... and I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 12/17/2019 1:02:00 PM
Thank you and season's best to you and yours ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/13/2019 8:57:00 AM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this, the picture and the audio. God bless you.
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Date: 12/13/2019 10:21:00 AM
I am truly pleased for your sharing ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/13/2019 4:46:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Sir William - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o)
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Date: 12/13/2019 10:25:00 AM
You honor me beyond measure my friend, with your kind words of encouragement Gregory ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/12/2019 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on a beautiful win!;)
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Date: 12/13/2019 2:25:00 AM
Your charms are unceasing ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/12/2019 10:19:00 PM
BIG BIG CONGRATS to win on the wonderful poem nicely weaved in so charming words. EXTRA CONGRATS for the excellent picture. Blessing always.
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Date: 12/13/2019 2:29:00 AM
I am gracefully pleased by your visit and thoughts ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/12/2019 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations, William!
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Date: 12/13/2019 2:31:00 AM
My heartfelt thanks Kim ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/12/2019 6:53:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem William
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Date: 12/13/2019 2:32:00 AM
Many thanks Gregory~ Aloha always William

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